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Roses are red, violets are blue,
This kind of poem is way over used,
Won't claim I'm romantic, won't say that I'm tough,
I'll say that I love you, I hope that's enough,
No good at relations, but that you can tell,
But I know my feelings, yes I know them well,
If they say I love you, they've no reason to lie,
But I never hear them, for I'm way too shy,
Sometimes I will hear them, as they start to shout,
But I'm way too nervous, way too full of doubt,
I'm quiet and different, labeled often as weird,
A loser, a creeper, to be laughed at and feared,
But losers have feelings, of that I am sure,
Cause they won't stop screaming, "hey, go talk to her",
The point of this poem is to say that I care,
Inside me I'm sure, the feelings are there,
So remember this poem, next time I walk by,
I may find the courage to say more than "hi".
This kind of poem is way over used,
Won't claim I'm romantic, won't say that I'm tough,
I'll say that I love you, I hope that's enough,
No good at relations, but that you can tell,
But I know my feelings, yes I know them well,
If they say I love you, they've no reason to lie,
But I never hear them, for I'm way too shy,
Sometimes I will hear them, as they start to shout,
But I'm way too nervous, way too full of doubt,
I'm quiet and different, labeled often as weird,
A loser, a creeper, to be laughed at and feared,
But losers have feelings, of that I am sure,
Cause they won't stop screaming, "hey, go talk to her",
The point of this poem is to say that I care,
Inside me I'm sure, the feelings are there,
So remember this poem, next time I walk by,
I may find the courage to say more than "hi".
Good lord, I had no clue I had this in me. I also never thought I would write a love poem. Weird how that kind of things happens from time to time. Well, the gist of this poem is basically stating how I'm in love with a girl, we used to be close friends but we've drifted apart. I guess my dilemma is that I'm way to withdrawn to ask her out. This has been the case for most of my life. Well I apparently had this stored up fr a while, and It honestly feels good to get it out.
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Hmm I know how this one feels except with the genders the other way around